Uneven edit, make sure shots are evenly paced.
Use a CCTV camera effect on when Emily is coming in
We used foley sound well
We need to add music to make it more engaging
Tighten edit the edit, as soon as the action finishes cut because it slows it down. We need our title sequence to be fast paced so the audience does not lose attention.
The pan is too long in the establishing shot. Cut it.
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